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发表于 2016-8-3 14:06:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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        Parks
        Benefits to Individuals
        Parks offer opportunities to enrich the quality of life for persons of all ages and abilities.
        点评:你是不是会说Parks can make our life more colorful…
         
        Strong evidence shows that when people have access to parks, they exercise more.
        点评:你是不是会说When people can go to parks, they do more exercises.
         
        Regular physical activity has been shown to increase health and reduce the risk of a wide range of diseases, including heart disease, hypertension, colon cancer, and diabetes. Physical activity also relieves symptoms of depression and anxiety, improves mood, and enhances psychological well-being. Beyond the benefits of exercise, a growing body of research shows that contact with the natural world improves physical and psychological health. Older adults who participate in a variety of social and recreational opportunities benefit from the social connections and interactions that are fundamental to their well-being.
        点评:还是例子~
         
        Benefits to Communities
        Parks have long been recognized as key contributors to the aesthetic and physical quality of neighborhoods.
        点评:你是不是会说Parks can make our neighborhoods more beautiful.这里的be recognized其实也没啥大意思,但加了就是make a difference,体会~aesthetic,大家应该都学过,开口的时候多少人想得到?
         
        Today, we realize that parks are more than recreation and visual assets to communities; they are valuable contributors to larger community policy objectives, such as public health, youth development, job opportunities, social and cultural exchange, and community building.
        点评:visual assets视觉财富,注意财富的表达。
        下面的一如既往的例子。
         
        At the community level parks play a special role, they have something to offer everyone from young children and teens, to families, adults and the elderly; their presence can also be a cohesive force.
        点评:…’s presence其实可以作为一个很好的代词的替代品,在这里就相当于they。
         
        They are more than places to recreate and relate to nature; parks can also offer a multitude of opportunities to engage in arts and music. A park can be a community focal point, a symbol of its vitality and character, adding to its overall health, well-being and quality of life.
        点评:more than …不仅仅是,你是不是会说not only… but also?
        engage in 参与
        focal point 焦点
         
       
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        Gardens
        Uses for the garden space
        A garden can have aesthetic, functional, and recreational uses:
        Cooperation with nature
        ● plant cultivation种花
         
        Observation of nature
        ● bird- and insect-watching
        ● Reflection on the changing seasons
         
        Relaxation
        ● Family dinners on the terrace
        ● Children playing in the garden
        ● Reading and relaxing in the hammock在吊床上读书休憩
        ● Maintaining the flowerbeds
        ● Pottering in the shed
        ● Basking in warm sunshine晒太阳
        ● Escaping oppressive sunlight and heat避暑
         
        Growing useful produce
        ● Flowers to cut and bring inside for indoor beauty
        ● Fresh herbs and vegetables for cooking
        点评:这篇太强悍了,不解释,自己看~
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