【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】女性类真题7分范文（2/2）

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女性类真题
        【We need more female leaders in politics to reduce violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?】
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Peace-loving leaders are also concerned about their citizens' living conditions. They refuse to put their people at risk by taking violent actions toward other countries, not because of their gender, but because of the serious damage any war involves.
A third reason why I do not think gender is the main factor in a leader's attitude about violence is that in most modern societies, the political system restricts their leaders' power to carry out violent plans. Therefore, one single leader's power would not be so influential that it can lead to an unjust war.
Thus, my conclusion is that any leader who takes the improvements of their people's living conditions seriously will try to avoid violent actions that threaten peace, regardless of his or her gender.爱好和平的领导人同样会关注人民的生活环境。他们不愿对他国采取暴力行动而将人民置于危险之中，这与他们的性别无关，只是因为任何战争都会带来严重破坏。
我之所以认为性别不是影响领导人对待暴力的第三个原因就是在大多数现代社会中，政治体系约束了领导人执行暴力计划的权力。因此，单个领导人的权力影响力不足以大到能够引发非正义战争。
因此，我的结论是，不论是何性别，任何认真地去改善人民生活条件的领导人，都会去努力避免威胁和平的暴力行动的。