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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7分范文二(2/2)

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发表于 2016-8-2 13:31:06 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
动物类真题
        【Wild animals are still not protected by humans. What are the causes and what are the solutions?】
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                eco-balance
       
       
               
       
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As for solutions to this worrying situation, I believe we should enforce stricter laws that can effectively deter the illegal trade of endangered animals and their body parts. This is so urgent that I firmly believe if no such laws are enforced on an international scale immediately, we will indeed face the extinction of even larger numbers of rare animals in years to come.
Compared with punishment, prevention is even more important. Education about the importance of eco-balance seems to be an effective way to achieve this because it gets to the root of this problem, although it may take a longer time for this measure to produce concrete results.至于解决这个令人担忧的情况的方法,我认为我们应该执行更加严格的法律,这可以有效地阻止那些对濒危动物及其身体器官的非法贩卖。严峻的形势使我坚定地认为,假如不立即在国际范围内执行这类法律,在不久的将来,很多稀有动物就真的会面临灭绝了。
相对于惩罚,预防更为重要。关于生态平衡重要性的教育似乎是一条有效途径,尽管这类措施可能要花费较长的时间才能产生具体成效,但它可以触及到问题的根源。
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