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发表于 2016-7-29 10:08:52
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"Made in China" is a label attached to the productsmanufactured in China.Owing to the advantages ofrich labor resources and raw material resources inChina, products made in China are well-received inthe world on account of their competitive price andsuperior quality."Made in China" has become a recognizable label in the world today thanksto the rapid development of the manufacturing industry in China.At present, China has becomethe world's manufacturing center and is named "World Workshop".Although globally a greatnumber of electronic products and shoes are made in China, all their designs are completed inEuropean and American countries.Nowadays a growing number of Chinese companies aredevoting themselves to establishing their own brands, hoping to be transformed from "Made inChina" into "Designed in China".
1.“由于中国有丰富的劳动力资源…”,可以使用owing to是“受到世界各国的欢迎”的原因，翻译时可以使用on account of引出理由，避免重复。
2.“中国的制造业迅速发展”与“‘中国制造’已经成为一个在全球广受认识的标签”是因果关系，为避免与前面表达原因的短语重复，可以使用短语thanks to...。
3.在“尽管全球大量的电子产品和鞋都是中国制造，但这些产品的设计都是在欧美国家完成的”中，“电子产品和鞋”是“制造”的受动者，“设计”是“完成”的受动者，故使用被动语态来翻译。
4.最后一句中“希望实现从‘中国制造’到‘中国设计’的转变”可使用现在分词作状语，译作hoping to betransformed from “Made in China” into “Designed in China”。“实现”一词可省略，把汉语原文中的名词“转变”译作动词transform，这样处理句子更简洁。 |
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