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发表于 2016-7-28 23:02:05
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1.第2句中的前半句“基于......”可处理为状语,译为Basedon the firing techniques of former dynasties;后半句“景德镇成功地......”若逐字对译为Jingdezhen hadsuccessfully manufactured...则不符合英语表达习惯,“青花瓷”是此段落的主题,宜把“青花瓷”转换为主语,用被动语态强调受动者,译为the blue and white porcelains hadbeen successfully manufactured in Jingdezhen。
2.第3句中的“其”指代的是前面提到的“元青花瓷”,翻译时可将逗号后的“其风格与……大相径庭”处理成非限制性定语从句whose styles are quite different from...,使句子主次分明。
3.第4句中的“使景德镇成为当时世界制瓷业的中心”可用made sb./sth. ...(使某人/某物成为……)的结构来表达,译为 made Jingdezhen the center of porcelain industry...。
4.倒数第2句的前半句为因,后半句为果,若直译,句子会稍显头重脚轻;此处可把果(即“元青花瓷异常珍贵”)处理成主干,即 the blue and white porcelains of the Yuan Dynasty are extremelyprecious,而把因处理成状语,用表被动的分词短语来表达,即finely made and rarely handed down。
5.最后一句的两个分句之间意思联系不太紧密,可考虑拆译成两个独立的句子,处理为The blue and whiteporcelains were further developed in... Some fine works are... for collectors。
The Yuan Dynasty is a key period in the developmentof Chinese porcelain industry. Based on the firingtechniques of former dynasties, the blue and whiteporcelains had been successfully manufactured inJingdezhen. The blue and white porcelains of theYuan Dynasty are grand and splendid, whose stylesare quite different from those of the traditional porcelains. The rising of blue and whiteporcelain in the Yuan Dynasty also made Jingdezhen the center of porcelain industry in theworld at that time. Finely made and rarely handed down, the blue and white porcelains of theYuan Dynasty are extremely precious. The blue and white porcelains were further developed inthe Ming and Qing Dynasties. Some fine works are the dream targets for collectors。 |
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