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2013年12月英语六级作文真题范文及点评:幸福的源泉

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  2013年12月英语六级考试作文范文标准版点评,考完试的同学可以对比一下自己的考场作文,备考的同学也可以研究一下考题。希望大家六级考试顺利通过。
  2. Directions:
  For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  【点评】
  本次作文主题围绕“幸福的源泉”,难度不大。虽然表面有些抽象,但根据题干意义还是可以迅速地将本文分成2-3部分:1.总述幸福产生源泉,不是没有问题,而是处理问题的能力。2.阐述自身有哪些解决问题、保持幸福的方法。
  Happiness – Go for it
  In this long journey we call "life", everybody is in pursuit of happiness and has their own interpretation of happiness. An inspiring idea is that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, which reveals the very truth about happiness. It cannot be achieved through waiting, but only through striving.
  There is no way that life always progresses as we wish. Problems may occur and we find ourselves in trouble, but it doesn't mean we are deprived of happiness. There are numerous examples for us to follow: disabled people overcoming obstacles, patients fighting against disease, poverty-stricken people achieving their dreams -- all these inspiring heroes. Their lives are definitely not problem-free, but they have found happiness by courageously solving problems.
  Therefore, it is essential to develop the ability to deal with problems.  We need to muster our courage and confidence to face the fact. Meanwhile, we need to find effective ways to cope with them.
  In a word, if we stay strong and approach problems effectively, there will be no storm in life that we cannot weather. And after the storm, happiness is within our reach.

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