【备考真题训练】2009年6月英语六级考试A卷写作点评大全

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2009年6月20日大学英语六级考试作文权威点评（点点）
        　　On the importance of a name
        　　1. 有人说名字或名称很重要
        　　2. 也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要
        　　3. 我认为
        　　本次六级考试的作文题目给人的第一个感觉就是体裁在意料之中，但题材在意料之外。具体来说，意料之外是指这次所考的主题虽然也是社会热点，比如说现在人特别讲究名称的重要性，无论是给小孩起名字，还是给单位冠名，也带有点迷信的成分吧，我想这也许是命题者命题的原因之一吧，鼓励当代人特别是大学生树立正确的价值观念，摒弃迷信，名字只是外在的，而自己的实力和学识是内在的，是最重要的，这正是马克思主义哲学中所说的内容和形式的关系，内容是主要的，形式是外在的，最好做到内容和形式的完美统一。但是这个题目与大学生的生活关系并不是很大，或者说大学生不容易注意到这类的话题，有种反押题的感觉和倾向，这对于未来的考生来说，关注社会热点，哪怕是点滴小事，作为素材的储备，也是必要的，做一个有心人。紧跟时代步伐是准备六级作文的一个很重要的方向。
        　　从体裁层面上看，这次的题目完全属于正反观点对比+个人观点阐述的传统三段论的格式，难度较低，基本上都是考生很熟悉的段落结构，但是考生要特别注意两点：第一，写作中要包含提纲中所有的要点，每一段要有topic sentense ，给阅卷老师以结构清晰的感觉，有助于你的高分。第二，虽然是传统的观点类作文体裁，但是尽量不要使用模板，以免造成不必要的失分， 句式要富有变化，多一些闪光词汇和闪光句型，对于 四六级 作文，形式和结构的重要性远远大于内容，毕竟受到阅卷时间的限制，比如说很多考生会写with the development of economy , I believe that ...之类的句型，这都属于低分标志，可以替换成As the economy evolves at a fast speed 等等，另外在表达观点的时候不一定老是用think ,believe 等低级词汇，可以替换成maintain , deem argue等等，除此之外，某某非常重要的表达也是多种多样，建议大家变换使用，总之替换的理念一定要贯彻下去，不光是对写作，对 四六级 考试的其他题型，如阅读，听力等也有相当大的帮助。
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        2009年6月英语六级作文评析及范文（昂立教育）
        　　09年6月20日的六级作文题是：
        　　1有人认为名字很重要
        　　2也有人认为无关紧要，
        　　3我认为
        　　By 翁晓燕 Helen
        　　点评：如果说四级的作文题目有点偏的话，这篇作文的内容几乎就游离在所有的预料之外了，不知道四六级考试委员会出题的时候是不是旨在不让任何人预测到呢（just kidding），但是撇开话题不说，模式还是经典的四六级议论文格式，属于议论文中的争议型，典型的一些人认为……另一些人认为……我认为……。昂立的课堂上已经同学员们清晰讲解过多次这样的作文模式，也反复经过操练，只要考生的段落内容分配无误，相信加以一些基本的文字功底应该不成问题，下面是及格范文供大家参考。
        　　及格版范文：
        　　On the importance of a name
        　　Some people think that a name is very important. Most parents would look into the dictionary, search on the internet, or even go to some fortune-tellers for great names for their children. They believe that a name would affect one’s future events such as marriage, career or even life span. That’s why some people, after they grow up and find their own names not to their own taste, would change their names.
        　　However, others disagree. They are saying that a name is just made as a way of calling a person. And one’s fate is decided by his/her own efforts. They believe that parents shouldn’t pay too much attention or money on naming their children. What’s important is that they should give them the right education to make sure they grow up to be nice people.
        　　As for me, I have to say I agree with the latter more. I mean surely a beautiful name would be wonderful itself, but it doesn’t make your life better. We should make our life better by our efforts but not names.
        　　及格版范文特点是表达能力比较有限，只能通过简单的词汇和句式去达到题目要求的文章大意，且观点较为笼统，篇幅也勉强符合要求，下面是优秀版范文参考，相比之下，功底相对深厚，词汇丰富，句式结构出彩，观点表达到位。
        　　优秀版范文：
        　　On the importance of a name
        　　Interestingly, recently the importance of a name has been brought into hot discussion.
        　　Some people strongly believe that a name is responsible for a person’s fate, that’s why they would take all the trouble to try various ways to find wonderful names for their children, expecting the names would work magic for a glorious future. According to these people, a child may grow up happy, smart, attractive, elegant or successful due to their names.
        　　Despite that, others have voiced a different opinion that a name is relatively insignificant comparing to the efforts a person makes to realize his/her future dream as a person’s fate is dominantly decided by a person himself/herself instead of the name he/she was given at his/her birth. Opportunities may count; and a person’s own efforts and decisions definitely count; but a name simply functions as the way of the person being called by others, which doesn’t work to change one’s life.
        　　As far as I am concerned, a beautiful name certainly is one of the factors to make a great first impression. However, it’s not so important and powerful as to decide a person’s future. To grab the fate, we need intelligence, honesty, sincerity and efforts more than a name.