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  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with
others.
          改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
          26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when
we finish eating without doing any washing.
          改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind
after meal.
          27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
          改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
          28. What's about nonsmokers?
          改进: What about nonsmokers?
          29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
          改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
          30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
          改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
          31. I am not good at maths, but English
          改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not
mathematics but English.
          32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure
time?
          改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
          33.It is children who clear about their interests.
          改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
          34. I agree the latter idea.
          改进: I agree with the latter idea.
          35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
          改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
          36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
          改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
          37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
          改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old
to learn.
          38. No one knows all the things.
          改进: No one knows everything.
          39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
          改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
          40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
          改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
          41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
          改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
          42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
          改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
          43. They will learn the bad habits.
          改进: They will develop bad habits.
          44. In this continued process, people make progress.
          改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
          45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
          改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
          46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for
deficiency.
          改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for
our shortcomings.
          47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
          改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
          48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
          改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
          49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary
lost.
          改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary
loss.
          50. I felt alone.
          改进: I felt lonely.
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