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　　2011年6月大学英语四级作文
　　1、 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
　　2、 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
　　3、 我的建议
　　Online Shopping
　　范文：
In the wake of the development of internet technology comes the birth of on-line shopping. On-line shopping is definitely a new, convenient shopping way which has enjoyed considerable popularity amongst young people.
Compared with traditional shopping, there is so much variety in on-line market that you never fail to find what you want. And even something more convenient is that you just need click the mouse in front of your computer instead of going to shopping Mall. Moreover, on-line shopping, as it is, acts as a time-saving shopping mode, which meets the requirements of the people in current society with rapid tempo. Despite these, there also exist some shortcomings while you choose to purchase on line. Quality problem is found in an online survey to rank the top of on-line purchasers' anxiety, as goods can not be closely examined before you decide to get them and even some articles are not the same as they are described in on-line market.
Admittedly, there is a great deal of truth in both sides. Personally, advantages of on-line shopping more than compensate for its demerits. Whether you intend to purchase on line or not, one thing is certain: on-line shopping has been an irresistible tendency in our real life.
　　点评：
　　今年四级作文的难度不大，保持以往提纲式作文的特色，该文章确定为利弊分析性。首段引出网上购物现象；中间段落就该现象的优缺点进行论证，选取最突出的优缺点即可，如方便，经济，选择范围广等优点，缺点如质量问题，诚信问题，货物退换问题等；结尾段落要求给出个人观点。
　　范文首段中采用介绍句型，对网上购物进行整体解释，新概念三册第1课第1行： Pumas are large, cat-like animals which are found in America. 可以直接套用句型来解释网上购物，达到开门见山的效果。再如，谈到网购受到年轻人的青睐，选用短语enjoy considerable popularity. （详见新概念三册第21课第9-10行）；结尾段中首句总结中间段落的优缺点时，选用there is a great deal of truth in both sides.（详见新概念三册第9课第7行）。
　　不难看出，范文借鉴了很多新概念三册的句型结构和用词，平时在学习新概念教材时，不仅要深刻理解句型和文法，句型和文法背后的功能定位更是我们最需要了解的地方。表面上的理解仅仅纸上谈兵，应用输出才是学习的目的和学习之本。