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2013年英语六级作文预测:海外留学的利弊

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发表于 2016-7-11 19:35:15 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
>>海外留学的利弊
  1.海外留学的好处
  2.海外留学也存在一些问题
  3.我的观点
  范文背诵
  Overseas Study
  The discussion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few years. Let‘s have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.
  The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and advanced research facilities. What’s more, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view towards the world. Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.
  However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment. In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways. Finally, money is always a big problem. Many students have to find parttime jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.
  In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages. Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to our motherland.
  >>亮点词汇
  ①research facilities研究设施
  ②reasonable and balanced合理平衡的
  ③enterprisinga.进取精神的
  ④have difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难
  ⑤hinderv.阻碍,妨碍
  ⑥make contributions to our motherland为祖国作出贡献
  >>文章点评
  文章首段指出留学有利有弊。
  第二段中阐述的好处包括国外的学术水平更高,研究设施更先进,能培养更加合理的世界观,还能塑造良好的性格。末句使用which 引导的非限制性定语从句,增加句式多样性。
  第三段则指出,如果没做好准备就出国会遇到很多困难,而且文化差异和费用都是问题。
  末段下结论,即利大于弊。
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