歌词英译: 谁动了我的琴弦

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　　尝试着将《谁动了我的琴弦》翻成英文。为了压韵，折损了轻灵，殊不满意。
        　　
        　　
        　　谁动了我的琴弦唤我到窗前
        　　By whose hands were my strings being touched?
        　　Coming to the window, I stood and watched.
        　　流水浮舟你在深夜的那一边
        　　A light boat floats as water flows;
        　　in the other side of the night my love roams.
        　　谁倚着我的琴枕梦尽夜满月
        　　Who leans her head against the violin,
        　　dreaming a moon-lit night dream?
        　　还以为各自两边只能做蝴蝶
        　　We would stay but far apart,
        　　each a butterfly, playing its lonely part.
        　　谁让你我静似月
        　　Who turned us into the moon, chill and still,
        　　只能在心里默念
        　　speaking of a silent longing with a will?
        　　檐下燕替我飞到你身边
        　　from my roof a swallow took flight
        　　in my stead she will stay by your side.
        　　谁让你我静似月
        　　Who froze us chill and still, like the moon,
        　　各自孤单错弄弦
        　　both striking wrong notes in a lonely mood?
        　　沉夜的遥影四处风吹面
        　　on my face the wind scattered
        　　as the shadow of night heavily loomed.