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如今孩子的成长以及教育问题是社会议论纷纷的话题，2013福建高考英语作文题目就以这个话题，配有一副漫画图。对父母包揽一切，孩子过度依赖父母的现象进行评析。看到了这样的漫画，你想到的什么呢?为同学们提供一篇范文，看看都是从哪几方面谈论，有什么地方是值得我们学习的呢?
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内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容;
2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3. 提出你的看法。
注意：
1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数120左右;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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One possible version:
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
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发表于 2016-7-10 16:22:32