论述部分则有多种写法，但是最保险的做法就是根据文章要求，列举事例证明观点。若无法列举事例，可以通过其他方式，例如引用研究结果，个人生活观察等。常用句型：according to a study, from my experience, it is often seen that。若有两个例子，承前启后的词句有similarly, equally important, what is more, moreover, furthermore等。最后一句一定要再点题。
结尾段则应呼应首段，以喊口号为主，模式固定，熟背结尾模板即可。总结一定要换一种说法，不要跟前文重复，但是意思要接近。总结句一定要能把第二段讲的东西概括到，这个要凭个人发挥，万能句型：it is thus important for us to bear in mind that ....(此处写总结句); it is incumbent upon us that ...(同上)。Incumbent意为“有责任的”，用于替换should。In our society, respect is a rare
thing. People always complain that they are not fully respected and it is
always others that are to blame. However, the truth is, we will never be
respected until we start to respect others.
According to a study, in restaurants, waiters often provide better
service for those customers who say “thank you” than those who complain.
Similarly, those who say sorry when they do something wrong are more welcome
and popular than those who say nothing at allafter making a mistake of cause
some trouble. In most cases, people quarrel not because they are in a bad mood;
they do so because they feel not respected. The stories above suggest that we
can have something good in return and avoid unnecessary conflicts if we respect
others and keep friendly.
It is thus important for us to bear in mind that positive attitudes
towards others are the basis for creating good relationships. Showing respect
to others is the first step to building a harmonious society. It is always
better to start from ourselves than to blame others. (178个词)
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