小学生英语优秀作文集锦：A trip to Hong Kong 香港之旅

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　　A trip to Hong Kong
        　　Last weekend, I travelled in Hong Kong. Hong Kong is a very beautiful
modern city, it’s to the south of Guangdong. There are many tall buildings and
wonderful places to visit, such as: Victorian Park(维多利亚公园), Disneyland
park(迪士尼乐园). What I like best is to visit the Ocean Park(海洋公园). The Ocean Park
is the biggest recreation center(休闲中心) in the southeast of Asia(东南亚), each year
many people go there to pay a visit. We saw many performances by the dolphins
and the whales. The performances were very exciting and the animals were very
lovely. We really had a good time in Hong Kong.
        　　教师点评: 小作者向我们介绍了香港的著名的旅游景点,并且较详细地介绍了海洋公园的规模和动物的精彩表演.文章简洁朴实,用词恰当,不愧为一篇佳作.