Recently the relationship between teachers and students has been brought to
public attentive concern. A harmonious relationship between teachers and
students may bring a class success, while many students cannot get along well
with their teachers. Hence, how to handle this relationship effectively has
become a matter of concern.
To handle the relationship between teachers and students, first and
foremost, a teacher’s behaviour does matter a great deal. The teacher should
motivate students so that they want to learn. A good teacher should be patient,
friendly and strict. Teachers are also supposed to encourage students to think
independently and learn to study by themselves rather than forcing them. In
addition, it is advisable for students to spend much time communicating with
their teachers. A good case in point is that if you are discouraged by
difficulties in the process of studying, you can ask your teacher for help.
These are simple but enlightening suggestions based on my experience of
life. I am convinced that a hopeful and comfortable class atmosphere can be
created through collaborative efforts of both teachers and students.
此篇作文考察的话题是与学生息息相关的师生关系。题目要求我们针对如何最好地处理老师与学生之间的关系写一篇作文。文章主题明朗,但需要同学们知道handle(处理)一词的含义。接着,
我们就可以按照之前讲过的议论文类型之一——问题解决型的写作方法开始写作。
第一段:问题引入段。引出我们要讨论的师生关系的话题,提出当前师生关系存在着问题,可以写其表现最为明显的方面。接着用过渡句引出下文具体解决问题的方法。
第二段:主题论述段。从老师和学生两方面去列举处理师生关系的途径,即为了处理好师生关系,老师和学生分别应当怎样做。首句承上启下,接着分述具体途径,扩展句中可以用举例论证的方法丰富内容。
第三段:总结+展望。简要总结你所认为的改善师生关系的重要方法,并表达自己的愿景。大家视字数情况而定。