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2017年6月英语四级作文练习:存钱的意义

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发表于 2017-3-31 22:29:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  2017年6月英语四级作文练习:存钱的意义
          参考例文:
        The importance of saving money
          As far as we are concerned,today most Chinese college students are in
favor of the idea of saving money for later use,while quite many others think
it is much better to use tomorrow’s money today.
          In my opinion,I agree with the former.Firstly, saving money help people
get rid of some difficulties such as accidents,disease or other mishaps.As we
all know that,when one faces such tragedies as fir damage or fatal disease,one
would need a large amount of money to survive such difficulties.Secondly,saving money can give one a sense of satisfaction. Since most people work hard
every day,what makes them feel happy and satisfied is that they find they have
accumulated a large deposit through their hard-working,and they will go on
doing their best to work. Thirdly, saving money allows one to give a helping
hand to others who are in need of money.With money available at the moment,one
can offer badly needed help to those in temporary difficulty,say,those who are
suffering from flood, famine,a car accident,or things like that.Yet taking a
loan from a bank is often too costly.Thus,the timely help will be rewarded
with gratitude.
          All in all,it is useful for college students to save money,and it is also
an important aspect of the Chinese conception of virtue.
          要点提示:
          1、第一段,说明主题,防止偏题。该文主题是存钱的意义。
          2、第二段,分点说明存钱的意义,让人看一眼就能懂。
          3、第三段,总结全文。对第二段列举的观点进行总结。
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