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2017年6月英语六级作文练习范文:维持信任

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发表于 2017-3-24 18:53:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  2017年6月英语六级作文练习范文:维持信任
          Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, “It takes years
to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. ” You should write at least 150
words but no more than 200 words.
          参考范文:
          (主题评论)If individuals intend to acquire and enjoy long-time trust from
either family members, friends, colleagues or acquaintances, it is advisable for
them to cherish. (话语引出)Hence, when hearing the saying --It takes years to build
trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.--we can perceive/appreciate its
connotations.
          (话语联系主题)Apparently, this saying can be naturally associated with the
significance of maintaining trust. (现象)In daily communication,it is a common
expectation for a host of people to enjoy a harmonious relation with others.
(万能强调句:意义)It is a trustful relation that enables us to live in comfort, to work
in efficiency, and to study in confidence. (相关人 感受:排比)However, an increasing
number of people find it easy to gain others’ trust for one time, but they find
it hard to maintain trust for a long time. (万能举例:排比)Two examples can be given:
if a student cheats in a test, he may not be trusted by teachers for a term; if
an employee lies to his boss for minor matters, he may gain no opportunity of
promotion in future. (万能总结)As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large
numbers have come to realize the significance of maintaining trust in work and
life.
          (号召)Do bear in mind: maintaining trust ensures a harmonious relation in
communication. (观点:排比递进)I, as a youngster, am convinced that it is exceedingly
necessary for college students to build trust with friends and classmates, but
it is of greater necessity to maintain trust.
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