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发表于 2017-3-21 15:04:55
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第三部分：两种主要展开方式(解决倡导+总结观点)
建议可以这样写：
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that
总结一下文章。加几句议论。
范例：
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is of
great necessity for us to keep curious about the world. It is curiosity that may
push the world exploration into the next step. Only in this way can we have a
better world.
参考范文：
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why
it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate
your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An
English saying goes like this: Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. What it
wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one
resource.
There are several reasons contributing to the validity of this principle.
To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can
have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to
important event. What’s more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time
contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into
a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In
this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.
Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having
a backup plan could help one lead a better life.
个性版：
如果你要写出自己的版本，那么考场上一定要注意时间。思路可以按照我以下的框架来搭，这种方法一般同学请谨慎使用。
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on
the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can
give an example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at
least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
写作思路：
第一段：叙述引出;
第二段：个人例证;
第三段：总结陈述。
范文如下：
It has been widely noted that it is of utmost importance for a man to be
equipped with knowledge. Knowledge allows one to understand the history of the
world, the secrets of the universe and the stories of celebrities. Consequently,
one can consider knowledge as priceless treasure. However, a bellyful of
theories but very little experience makes us somewhat bookish. Without much
practice, we can hardly make use of knowledge, and hence fail to unlock the
treasure of knowledge. As the saying goes, ”Practice makes perfect”.
As a chemistry student, I have learned virtually all the fundamental
principles in the chemical world during my university life. I had felt rather
conceited until one day my mom asked me an unexpected question, which had never
been taught in textbooks, ”how to wipe off the yellow stain at the bottom of the
tea cup”. After a serious thought, I was totally silent and did not have a
single clue. Smiling happily, mom showed me how the use vinegar or radish water
to eliminate the stain left by tea leaves. Perhaps this method could be
attributed to the “acid-base” theory, but how can I possibly not come up with
such an idea?
Based on my personal experience, it is quite obvious that knowledge will be
of little use if we do not put it into practice. Rather, we should link what we
learn with how we do things. Swimming in the ocean of knowledge, we should
consider how to make the water more drinkable.
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