英文天天写：Revision

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        话题：
        Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
        Revision
        Revision refers to a changed and updated version. What is the revision referring to? How is it revised? What is the reason?
        This week's topic: They completed the revision... (90-110 words)
        Suggestions:
        1) revision of the script
        2) revision of the test paper
        3) revision of the requirements
        4) revision of the operating procedures
        5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.
        范例1：
        “Since there is no revision needed, work for today is done then. Would I have the pleasure of treating you to dinner?” the club manager asked. “I would like that very much,” the interior designer answered. As Hodge was putting the sketches back in the envelope, his cell phone vibrated. He took it out and scanned the caller identity. Then, the club manager smiled politely at the interior designer as he was standing up. “Please excuse me for a moment,” Hodge said. The interior designer responded with a smile and a small nod of his head.
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