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话题：
Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
A bit long
A bit long means something is slightly of greater length than necessary. What is a bit long? Why is it a bit long? What can be done about it?
This week's topic: They thought it was a bit long... (90-110 words)
Suggestions:
1) fingernails are a bit long and need cutting
2) the sleeves are a bit long and have to be rolled up
3) the speech is a bit long
4) the work hours are a bit long
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.
范例1：
Perhaps if Al had waited a bit longer, he would see the doppelganger he was looking for. Since no sooner had he pulled his vehicle away and turned the corner had a couple of people exited the restaurant. One was the owner of this new restaurant, who was also a club manager of Club 1997. The other person, walking next to the club manager, was a figure who resembled someone Al had know a very long time ago – the person whom Al had seen early crossing the street with a briefcase.
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发表于 2017-3-13 21:41:51