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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:22 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  It is generally believed that education is of vital importance in
individuals‘ development and well-being of societies. What should education
consist of to fulfill both these functions?
          With the rapid development of modern society, education is becoming more
and more crucial to both individuals and societies. The issue over what
education should consist of has considerably aroused people‘s wide concern. In
this essay, I seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives
and what influence could be brought.
          Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one should be
stressed is professional knowledge education. On one hand, under the fierce
competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience
attract many big companies. Therefore, study about one special area gives people
more opportunities to hurt an ideal job. On the other hand, this education is
also significant to develop societies in a long run.
          At the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education
is necessary for students, especially for teenagers. If you want to achieve
successfully in the modern societies, strong body is the first premise, which
makes you always in sharp. So education should push people to take care
themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.
          Last but not least, we should not lose sight of psychological education.
Psychological problems are serious nowadays and a sizable percentage of people
suffer from them. A survey conducted by a famous research organization indicates
that over 40 percent of students have various psychological problems, who really
need help from school and society. Even worse, if such problems cannot be
solved, they could hamper the progress of well-being society.
          Judging from what I have been discussed above, we may safely draw the
conclusion that three aspects cannot be separated in education, which play vital
important roles in the growth of individuals and societies. The fulfillment of
both people and societies can be done as long as we lay emphasis on three
aspects mentioned above.
          
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