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雅思写作指导:范文汇总-女孩犯罪率提高的原因及解决

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:23:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are
the causes and how to solve it?
          Juvenile delinquency is a very serious problem confronting us in modern
society. At the same time, the rate of young women crimes spearheads very fast.
Some sociologists and educationists show great concern about this problem. In
this essay, I will find out the causes for this issue and explore some possible
solutions.
          First of all, the rapid development of society and the changes of people's
value of the world account mainly for the issue. In the old days, women were
confined to housework and baby-sitting, which barricaded women's steps. Now,
with the eye-catching development of economy, many young women go out to find a
job, which renders them more opportunities to contact the outside world. As a
consequence, young women are apt to be influenced by the malfeasance in the
society.
          Secondly, the rise of criminal rate attributes to the lack of education of
women. The prosperity and luxury in some metropolises are very attractive to
some young women. Some of them leave the countryside in the hope that they can
make a good fortune in the cities, where they often find themselves disappointed
for lack of good education or skills. Therefore, some of them fell despaired and
embark on the criminal road.
          The last factor is the over-description of violence on the media. TV is the
most powerful medium, which transforms abundant information around the world.
However, some programs are full of violence description, sexual alluring and
bloody contents, which are easy to make young women astray.
          In order to solve the problem, people think up various solutions. From my
point of view, I think the following are worth mentioning.
          On the one hand, the government should pay more attention to the problem
and issue relevant laws to crack down young women crimes. Meanwhile, we should
strengthen education and raise the quality of people, helping them set up a
correct outlook of the world. Only when the government and the society join
hands in solving the problem, will the rate of young women crimes fall down.
(334 words)
          编辑提醒:雅思范文仅为大家提供一个写作思路,以及一些可参考的论点论据,文章仅供参考,切记不可原文背诵,否则可能导致极低的分数!
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