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雅思写作指导:范文汇总-妇女犯罪率提高的原因和解决

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:23:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence for young women is
increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations to the situation.
          It is reported that the proportion of young female criminal unfolds a
steady increasing trend, and women crime, especially the young female's
delinquency has become a serious social problem indeed. Young women, as the most
peaceable parts of human, are always regarded as the last aim by the police
office. Why they go astray is mainly due to the two following reasons: one is
their own character peculiarity, the other is from social pressure.
          As far as the former, for one thing, the female is sensitive to the trifles
and sentimental to the reins and loves. Sensitivity often puts them to the edge
unnecessarily and forms extreme ideas, which frequently leads to direct
criminal. Frangibility of sensibility makes them so depressed and despaired that
they have a high probability to do the illegal behavior when they slip down in
loves.
          As for the latter reason, the social pressure comes of traditionally sexual
discrimination and survival competition. It is no denying the fact that the
contemporary including the women are confronted with the more severe competition
than their ancestors were, and in addition to this point, females still have to
struggle with the deep-booted discrimination.
          When young women make their debut in the society, all kinds of crises,
trouble and pressure lay them into flat, which compels them to avenge and
relieve their feeling with lawless methods in unassisted situation. Ponderance
of young female criminal reveals long-term negligence to the female's inner and
outer circumstance. It is almost impossible to change female's nature, so the
society should take more care of women, especially for the young women. For
example, some psychological courses and the methods of solving problem are
effective measures to adjust the mood of women. In the meantime, prejudice to
women should be out of the social stage and fair, equal and friendly atmosphere
should be set up, which can help women to take part in the formal and rational
contention. Additionally, the society should approbate the female's
indispensable position of community and encourage them to show their special
aptitude and intelligence.
          Undisputablely, the rising criminal rate of young women has relation to
both females themselves and irrational social phenomena. Care and equity are the
best way to solve this increasing problem, after all, they are less
aggressive.
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