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托福分类话题作文:每日一练 第16期

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16. It has recently been announced that a newrestaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose thisplan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

                               
                                        参考分析:
                               
                               
                                        社区内的餐馆越多,竞争就越激烈,那么价钱就会更公道;可能会出现卫生问题;也可能有客人酗酒闹事(excessive drinking; get  drunk and create a disturbance; make trouble after getting drunk.)。
                               
                               
                                        参见:[5]。
                               
                       

                               
                                        16、同意新饭馆建立
(1)增加就业
(2)提供一个好的休闲娱乐场所
(3)贡献税收,改进社区
                               
                       

        Topic 16 A new restaurant in your neighborhood
        A new restaurant in my neighborhood would be the most exciting eventfor me. I personally have positive feelings towards this proposal(建议)and also believe that the people of my neighborhood shall also feelexcited about such an event.(不要再用agree了,换一种说法吧,像文中的这样feel excited about也明确地表达了作者的看法)
        Life in the fast lane(这里指的是快节奏的生活)today has turned out to be sohectic(翻译成忙碌的)and tedious(枯燥冗长的)to us that at times we feelexhausted and therefore unwilling to prepare our food. We also feel a strongurge towards a change in the type and flavor(调料)of foodthat we eat. A new restaurant at such times nearby shall make a difference toour lives.(作者首先用紧张和枯燥的生活作铺垫,从而提出一个新的餐厅换换口味可以改变生活滋味)
        In occasions of(就……而言)happiness, get-togethers andenjoyment, having a restaurant nearby is always a convenience for people here.For example, the restaurant can be a convenient place to hold a weddingreception, or a birthday ceremony.(一个餐厅还可以有很多用途,从而给人们带来聚餐的愉快与幸福)
        A new restaurant shall certainly add lots of enthusiasms(热情)and excitements to people here and people who have the greatest amountof enjoyment would be the younger people. They can relax in a new environmentwith the experience of a new atmosphere and people around and most of all,tasting something new. On the other hand, a new restaurant in our neighborhoodgives hope to young people who would like to make money through a part time orfull time job.(新建餐厅可以带来商机)
        In conclusion, a new restaurant will bring convenience to ourcommunity. So I personally welcome such a plan.
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