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烤鸭们，让我们每天多三分钟的坚持，来看看怎样能轻松地写出6.5分的雅思作文来。客套的话不多说了，今天是快乐烤鸭的第一天，讨论的是现在作文中常见的社会生活问题。
Topic： Life for people is becoming more stressful? What causes this? What
can we done to solve this?
Many people, especially those who are tend to have more tasks to accomplish
every day. Such as white-collars, are more likely to be upset or get annoyed,
and that is a sign of great mental pressure.Life for people is becoming more
stressful. Nowdayes, and this is not only a problem which is bothering
individual person all the time, but also a phenomenon that the companies and
governments should pay attention to.
The causes for stressful life vary. First of all, as it was previously
mentioned, the work which people are facing is endless, and most of the
assignments need to be fully concerntrated on and not a single mistake is
allowed. So the brain has to be functioning continuously for at least 8 hours a
day(not to mention addtional work), which leads to both physical and mental
tiredness. Secondly, there is no doubt that the pressure from the society is
making the situation worse. Since no matter how hard people work, they still
can't keep pace with the growing of CPI, the mood of desperation can be easiy
spread out. All pains but no gains, which certainly will result in unavoidable
stress. Thirdly, we can't deny it that a part of the stress comes from
ourselves. Try to think: what are we seeking for? Happiness? Perhaps not. It
seems that "happier than others" is more close to the reality. Sometimes this
kind of unhealthy competition blinds us and drives us to pursuit what we do not
need at all, and thus the stress.
To solve this problem, every aspect of the society, including companies,
governments and each single person, should make effort to raise the awareness of
psychological health. Companies should realize that it's the efficiency but not
working time that counts. If the duties are distributed scientifically, the
burden will be much lighter, and employees will take less time to achieve more
goals, therefore the pressure can be reduced naturally. And what governments can
do is to try their best to ensure that the basic needs of living, such as
housing, education and health care are guaranteed. In some degree, governments
can also guide the market to control the price within an appropriate limit.
Moreover, the most effective solution, in fact, is our own detachment, which
does not mean that we must get rid of desire or competition. However, we should
know exactly what we really need and want. Only when we totally follow our own
hearts can we feel what happiness is. And at that time, people will find that
the beauty of life is all around us and stress would be disappeared.
To sum up, though serious the problem is, we still have confidence to face
and slove it. What we need is to treat stress from an optimistic way. As the
saying goes, change what we can change and accept we cannot change, and then
life could be much
better.看到作文题，就可以判定它是report类的。推荐使用四段式，即提出问题，分析原因，给出办法，总结全篇。这是一篇6.5分的文章，一起来看有哪些值得学习之处。
第一段说明了现代生活压力无处不在，以白领的生活为例，然后接着指出了这样的现状会给个体带来不利，同时倡导公司和政府对此引起重视。
第二段从工作繁重，心理压力和人们内心的攀比心理三个方面才阐述压力越来越大的原因。
第三段也分别从公司，政府，个人的角度提出了可以改进的用来解压和让生活更加美好的办法 。
第四段结尾段，再次重申自己的观点，只要我们积极乐观就可以让自己的生活更好。
整篇文章写的很流畅，用词虽然比较普通，但是却很合适，思路也很清晰，相信烤鸭们每天多积累些这样的文字，会提高很多，6.5分也没那么难了，不是吗?
Vocabulary aquisition: (请务必记住这里的70%的内容，句型请见红色标示部分)
bother
vt. 烦扰，打扰;使……不安;使……恼怒
vi. 烦恼;操心，麻烦 n. 麻烦;烦恼
assignment
n. 分配;任务;作业;功课(相当于homework，但是用assignment会更正式)
function
n. 功能;[数] 函数;职责;盛大的集会
vi. 运行;活动;行使职责(注意文中动词用法，这个词用得好会很地道)
spread out
展开;铺开;伸张 (有些好的利益不能普及到每个人时可以用)
happier than others
可以用来表达口语中的攀比心理
unavoidable
不可避免的类似表达还有：inevitable inescapable(多指不可抗拒的自然力)
seeking for
v. 寻找;追求;探索 (hunt for / search for a job)
detachment
n. 分离，拆开(这里是指一种超然，超脱的状态)
get rid of 摆脱，出去
optimistic 乐观的 (这两个小词请烤鸭们牢记，常用的)
明天我们会继续社会生活的话题，到时再来看看argument的怎么写。 |
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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:35