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First of
all，一起review第一天短语和句型。请self-check一下哦!若能回忆出的30%，那么你就qualified，如果不合格，请back to the
previous page and make effort to acquire stuffs valuable for you。
?happier than others
?detachment
?Such as white-collars, are more likely to be upset or get annoyed, and
that is a sign of great mental pressure.
?So the brain has to be functioning continuously for at least 8 hours a
day(not to mention addtional work), which leads ?to both physical and mental
tiredness.
Next，来看今天的话题：
Topic: News media have become influential to our lives. Some people think
that is a positive development. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The 21st century has witnessed an unprecedented advancement in virtually
all fields of daily life, and the news media is no exception. Admittedly, it
brings a great convenience to our daily life by disseminating the latest
information around the world. However, its draws back should not be hidden and
thus ignored by the general
public.显而易见，这是篇论证文，同样是采用段论。第一段承认新闻媒体的不可替代的作用，同时认为不能忽视其消极影响。这也是全篇的点。
Doubtless, the impact of news media on society is profound. In the first
place, it offers a variety of news in terms of economic, society, culture,
business and so on. So individuals can get whatever they want. In the second
place, it is the most effective method of improving the moral standard of
society. For example, frugality is inculcated into many people’s mind as a
virtue, because of the massive reports on scarce resources. Besides, citizens
will also feel a sense of responsibility towards endangered species, if most of
the coverage offers the information about how serious these animals confronted
with.第二段，分三个小论点论证说明新媒体的作用。如带来人们需要的信息;有效地提高道德意识(以节俭使用资源例);有助于提高公民的社会责任感(以保护濒临灭绝的物种为例)。基本上一个论点说完都带有几句进一步说明的语句，使得论点更加充实和具有说服力。
Nevertheless, everything comes at a price. Actually, it is quite
understandable that the public is more curious about the bad news than the good
one. As a result, newspapers and magazines are there to provide what the public
want, and this can lead to some extent of distortion of perceptions. What’s
more, impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are likely to
imitate the violent or pornography content of the report, which is likely to
make these youngsters embark on an criminal
road.话锋一转，来阐述新闻媒体的负面影响。比如，人们会在认知上受到扭曲，因为信息不对等;一些网络不良信息会危害年轻人的成长。注意用词，这一段的词汇用得很棒!
Overall, although the news media might have some potential negative effect
on individuals, by guiding the teenagers properly, we can effectively eliminate
the downside of this practice. To conclude, I firmly believe the news media is
in the best interests of society as a
whole.总的来说，尽管新闻媒体有些不利的瑕疵，但是只要合理地对待，还是利远远大于弊的。结尾重申观点。
Vocabulary aquisition: (请务必记住这里的70%的内容，句型请见红色标示部分)
draw back
可作动词和名词，含义主要是拉开，退后，牵扯，牵绊
作动词：One must draw back in order to leap further. 为了跳得更远，必须暂且退后。
作名词：At last, dissertation points out the draw back of our program and
submits several possible solutions. 最后，本文提出了再设计上的不足以及可能的解决方案。
disseminate
vt. 宣传，传播;散布 vi. 散布;广为传播
Schools, in various forms, and teachers disseminate knowledge locally.
各式各样的学校和教师都在地方上传播知识。
embark on
从事，着手
embark on drastic reforms 大刀阔斧地开始改革
virtually=in fact /truly / actually 事实上
no exception 没有例外
frugality 勤俭，节约
massive coverage 大量的报道
confronted with=encounter 面对，遇到
understandable 人之常情，可以被理解的
注意文中的链接词：Admittedly，Doubtless，Besides，Nevertheless，Actually，What's
more，Overall，To conclude，知道烤鸭们一定很熟，但是因为重要，还是想提出来。
Address once more，文中用词不大但是很好，注意格式，分论点说完要在写几句来补充，6.5并不难。今天就到这了，See you
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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:35