雅思写作真题范文:慈善组织 Charity organization

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　　下面是一篇关于慈善组织的雅思写作真题范文，这篇雅思写作范文的主要内容是讨论了有人认为慈善组织应该给哪些格外需要帮助的人以支援，另外一些人则认为慈善组织应该把注意力放在自己国家的人身上。讨论这两种观点，并给出你自己的观点。
        　　Some people believe that charity organizations should give the aid to those
who are in great needs, some people think that charity organizations should
concentrate on helping people who live in their own country. Discuss both views
and give your opinion. (抽象类)
        　　Introduction
        　　Background – theme – view
        　　Charity organization
        　　什么是慈善组织，它的目的是什么，它的作用是什么，什么时候会出现对于慈善组织的讨论?
        　　When people suffer some natural disasters and are confronted with
difficulties, they may expect the aid from others, especially charity
organizations. However, there is an opinion that charity organizations should
help people of their own country instead of giving aid to whoever in need. From
my perspective, the aid should be given to those in need regardless of their
nationality.
        　　Natural disasters, war or social turmoil, all these factors may render
people fall into poverty and diseases. The rise of charity organizations is
associated with the emergence of these disasters. They relieve people from great
sufferings and give people in need hope of survival. However, there is an
opinion that aid from charities should only be given to people living in their
countries while others think that charity should benefit all people. I tend to
believe the latter is of more justification.
        　　Body 1: why we should give help to those in great needs? What is the
responsibility of charity organizations?
        　　To help those in great needs is a reflection of moral obligation/duty for
human beings.(意义) And this practice of helping others will have numerous/many
positive effects involving/including promoting economic development and
enhancing social harmony. (影响和作用)Meanwhile, the aid from charity organizations
may cover a wide range of people and may be more transparent. However, there are
some disadvantages of charity organizations. The money donated by charity
organizations may be taken away by local officials and cannot reach those who
are really in need. What’s more, charity organizations tend to give aid to those
areas which are frequently reported by the media. This will cause regional
imbalance or even regional conflict.
        　　Body 2: whether aid from charities should only be given to local
people?
        　　As for those who advocate that aid for charity organization should be given
to people living in their own country, I hold conservative attitude. There is no
denying that it is more effective for charity organizations to give aid to local
people. However, how to ensure fairness/equality among different peoples is the
priority for charities. Fair distribution of resources and aid is an objective
reflection of human virtues. (反证)If every individual or every organization just
focus on their own interest, the world will become indifferent and
unfriendly.
        　　In conclusion, charity organization should give aid to people who are in
great need without considering their social background, their nationality and
something irrelevant. However, the aid should be supervised and monitored by
some independent organizations for fear of corruption or embezzlement. /
However, the aid should be controlled or supervised by some dependent
organizations so that it can reach the targeted people.
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