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雅思写作辅导:范文118篇(含小作文)part 14

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:11 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  范文1
          Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so
much debated as in our society. Nowadays,the competition is more and more
furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach
competition to children that it will be bad for their growth,let them learn how
to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; this
essay will outline three reasons.
          The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to
analyze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching,
the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children
usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really
worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.
          Another reason is that if children work together,they could easily find out
an d supply their gaps. Because of limit of age,in order to children’s knowledge
is limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together,
they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mist akes.
          Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A
people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited.Lots of things are
really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work
together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is
important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.
          In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how
to work together, in order to their better future.
          范文2
          Competition and cooperation are going along together in the modern society.
And there has been an on-going argument on which to be more essential in
children’s education. In my opinion, they are both necessary, and the society
cannot grow any more without either of them.
          On one hand, competition concerns about the subsistence of individuals and
companies. We can take Motorola for instance. He used to be the strongest
cooperation in telecommunication industry. No one could compete with him. But he
slowed his steps in exploration of digital communication, which gave a good
chance for companies like NOKIA and SIMENCE to develop. And NOKIA now has
possessed more than 30% of the market, while SIMENCE 25%. To individuals,the
thing is the same. No employer would like to employ a man without ambition and
progressive spirit.
          On the other hand, we can achieve no goals without cooperation. Along with
the division of labor in society, no one can fulfill a task by himself. There
are many examples in our lives. In the designing process of a PC game, it cost
many people to work together. Some work on the ideas, some paints the images,
some edit the music, and some deal with the programs. Without this cooperation,
the production would break down. Since jobs are more and more complicated, the
only way to deal with them is separating people into groups, and making them
cooperate with each other.
          You can tell from my comments above, without competitions we will be able
to live peacefully though develop slowly, but without cooperation, we cannot
live in a modern society. Furthermore,since China put out the one-child policy,
Chinese children are competing with each other drastically, what they are short
of is cooperation. So, instead of competition,children should learn more about
cooperation.
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