雅思写作辅导:范文118篇(含小作文)part 3

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　　【写作题目】
        　　Although it is a freedom to use tobacco{烟草} while some people think it
should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you
agree or disagree? What’s your opinion?
        　　范文4
        　　Apparently, it would seem that tobacco is totally different substance from
drugs, and it can be used freedom by public. In fact, however, our authority
should make tobacco illegal as well as drugs, and using of tobacco should be
controlled strictly.
        　　Tobacco only can be used for research and medical purpose. As far as I am
concerned, as a kind of dope, tobacco has been widely used to help patients
alleviate their pain in surgery. At the same time, ordinary people should not be
allowed to access it legally for two main reasons.
        　　Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most
conspicuous one: it is harmful that smokers addict to tobacco. Many decades ago,
scientists have already found that there is a definite link between smoking and
bronchial troubles, cardiac disease and lung cancer. More seriously, it not only
has negative influence for smokers, but others living or working in same
surrounding, even the next generation of a smoking pregnant women may be harmed
by so-called “second hand smoking”. Research shows that sometimes “second hand
smoking” is more dangerous than smoking directly, because, at least smokers can
get the protection from filter tips to some extent. Thus, compared to the hazard
of drugs, tobacco can involve more other innocent people and harm their health
unknowingly.
        　　The second aspect relates to the problem that our natural resources and
money are wasted senselessly during the course of planting, transporting and
manufacturing tobacco. In light of a statistics, China consumes nearly 1,000
tons of wood fibers to produce cigarettes annually. Besides, the investment
absorbed by tobacco manufacturers every year, is enough to solve all financial
troubles that higher education have to face. Obviously, if tobacco is banned by
our governments, it means that considerable money will be saved.
        　　In summary, judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at
the conclusion that tobacco should be forbidden as well as drugs except for a
few special purposes, such as research and medicine.