Dear
As a valued customer of [name of company], we couldn't wait to bring you
the good news. This letter is to announce the incorporation of our new customer
incentive program (CIP?)。 Well, maybe we haven't thought of a great logo for it
yet, but if you read on I think you'll agree that no matter what we call it,
it's super!
Starting on June 1st, a record of your account with our store will be
maintained on a cumulative basis for a period of one year. Once your purchases
have reached $500, you will be automatically entitled to a 5% discount on any
order placed, including orders for sale items. When your orders have reached the
$1,000 mark, your discount will increase to 10%. A $1,500 accumulation of orders
will entitle you to a 15% discount and once you have reached $2,000 you will
receive 20% off all merchandise orders. We think it's a great idea and hope that
you agree.
Won't you send us a purchase order today to get you started on your way? If
you think of a good name for us to tag onto this new discount program, please
let us know!
-商务英语
daiy