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英文天天写:他在为谁埋单?

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发表于 2016-8-9 09:20:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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        《英文天天写》是沪江部落一档写作类节目,其目的在于提升大家的英语写作能力。每期节目主持人都会给出一个话题,积极参加的童鞋还会得到主持人的专业点评哦!想提高英语写作的童鞋千万不要错过哦!
        背景介绍:
        李天一案二审最新消息:李某某等5人强奸案终审维持原判。法院宣判结束后的法庭教育阶段,法官特别对当场听取判决结果的李某某说:“作出这样的判决,跟你是谁的儿子没有关系。”在11月19日李某某案二审庭审结束前,李某某当庭宣读了由其本人所写、长达10分钟的“最后陈述”。其中提到,“一切的过错都指向了我。难道就因为我是李双江的儿子吗?”
        话题:
        那么究竟他在为谁埋单?父母的过分宠溺?自己的嚣张任性?社会的物欲横流背景?舆论的过分曝光?
        范例1:
        Even if LI Shuangjiang and his second wife are household names in China (a little bit exaggeration), they are just two little potatoes in star-studded Beijing City. Moreover, they have implemented a terrible Public Relation strategy. If this kind of thing happens, parents, especially rich parents, would pay money to the playgirl as much as possible and as quickly as possible in order to save the face and name of their son, no matter how trustful, naive and pure you think your son is or used to be. This is a knee-jerk reaction to normal parents.
       
        However, they stupidly chose to stand in the court to try to win a title of john. Did their brains are full of glue? But in the end, their son got the most shameful name “a raper” which are considered fairly by most people, including me.
       
        Furthermore, if LI XX’s last statement in court said “Why all of you are targeting at me, just because I am the son of LI Shuangjiang?”, the ten-years sentence is really deserved for him. He was so silly that even don't know to grab the last chance to express regret for the girl and win even a scarce appaludes for him. LI XX, game is over to study more in the jail.
        范例2:
        I searched the declare letter in Google and It was so well-written that I doubted whether it was written by Li. , the media and public opinions did interfered too much that we can not even tell the truth. No matter he is innocent or not, it is a sad story. In my opinion, I would attribute this tragedy to the failure of his family education.
        Personally speaking, I am pretty admired him in many aspects because he is really versatile. However, he received all those good education expect for the most fundamental quality, which is how to be a human being. I agree with the judge said that the final ending does not depends on whose son he is. People are doomed to pay back for their faults. The essential nature of education is building up the right value towards the society. Without that, it won’t matter if you are capable of so many skills or not. I think his parents contribute a lot to their son’s tragedy. After all, Li himself is not an adult yet. They have the obligation to help him distinguishing the right from wrong.
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