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2012年10月20日雅思大作文题目：
Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
解析这道题目之前大体介绍下作为出现概率最高的“对立双方题型”的几种分类。对立双方题型大体上可以分为：1. 客观现象的优缺点题型 2. 对idea无明显限制的观点题3. 对idea有限制的观点题
对于第2.和第3类题型。等到具体题目是给大家做具体的解释。该题属于第一类。这类题中，考官出题会频繁地使用“advantages”“disadvantages”“positive””negative”等关键字。通常来说此类题目在想法上对于考生没有过多的限制，因此，从这个角度上来讲，此类题目偏简单。
旅游的好处：
1. 丰富了人们的生活。
2. 扩大人的交际圈
3. 刺激当地经济的发展
4. 促进了不同国家，不同地域人的交流 等等
旅游的坏处：
1. 带来文化的冲突，使得不同民族，种族的人的偏见更激化。
2. 对当地的环境带来污染。
下面提供上述素材中其中一个的具体行文 (此趋势丰富了人的生活)：
鉴于这个题目做到切题不难，所以期望高分的同学可以在句式上可以考虑在句式上花点功夫，其中一个常用的办法是在主语和谓语中插入定语，以此来使得一个句子传递的信息更具体。
比如：下划线属于定语
一个在弗吉尼亚吃完早饭的人可以在晚上欣赏紫禁城的夜色。
An individual having had breakfast in Virginia could enjoy the enchanting night over the Forbidden City.
Everyone has a desire to experience a desire to visit a place that one has never been to and to have knowledge of how people in other parts of the world live. Whereas, in the past when distances were a barrier, our ancestors were deprived of the chance, being only able to reach a land within several days’ ride. However, this has not been a concern thanks to this trend. The convenience of transport has allowed an individual having had breakfast in Virginia to enjoy the enchanting night over the Forbidden City. |
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发表于 2016-7-10 14:42:26