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发表于 2016-7-10 14:36:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  一、长短句原则
          短句放在段首或者段末,可以揭示主题:
          As a creature , I eat; as a man , I read. Although one action is
          to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the
intellectual
          need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
          强烈建议:在文章第一段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短
          句介绍主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结
          尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
          二、主题句原则
          三、一二三原则
          1 )in the first place, in the second place, lastly
          2 )to begin with , furthermore, finally
          3 )to start with , in addition, finally
          4 )first and foremost, besides, last but not least
          5 )for one thing , for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
          四、短语优先原则
          两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数
          I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
          I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
          五、多实少虚原则
          一定要多用实词,少用虚词(比较大的词)。good, nice 空洞,generous,
          humorous, smart, gentle , warm-hearted , hospitable 形象。再比如:
          走出房间空洞的词是:walk out of the room
          但是
          小偷走出房间应该说:slip/sneak out of the room
          小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
          小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
          老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
          六、多变句式原则
          1 )加法(串联)
          2 )转折(拐弯抹角)
          3 )因果
          4 )失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
          5 )附加(多此一举)
          Ms. Pan , an English teacher who has taught us for three semesters
          ,is easy-going.
          6 )排比(排山倒海句)
          一个个排比句,一个个对偶句,一个个不定式,一个个短语,使文章有排山
          倒海之势!
          Whether your tastes are modern or traditional , sophisticated or
          simple, there is plenty in London for you.
          Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as
          oil , coal , natural gas, solar heat , wind and ocean tides.
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