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写作平白无奇的话那只能证明你会写，而并不能代表你写的很不错~ 要有自己的创意!
TIPS
本篇听写只听写嘉宾的话，主持人的话不需要听写。听仔细些。
主持人的话①RS: "Wouldn't that be highly subjective?"
主持人的话②RS: "You say 'right away.' What do you mean right away, in the first sentence -- "
主持人的话③AA: "The first chapter?"
主持人的话④RS: " -- in the first chapter, in the first paragraph?"
HINTS
sympathy
empathy
Do they have a unique voice when they speak in their dialogue? That would be one of the first things. Does the reader feel sympathy or empathy or at least some kind of strong reaction to these characters?
Creative writing, as you continue to work in the field, you see that it is often subjective in the ways in which people express things. But certain things are universal about good literature, and one of them is that good literature makes the reader think about a lot of issues and makes the reader feel about a lot of issues that are central in the novel. And if that connection is not created right away, then your book has failed on some level.
If it is a story, yes, the first paragraph. If it is a novel, then you have a few more pages to work with, but within two or three pages, the reader must want to continue reading. The reader must say wow, this is really exciting and worth my time.他们有一个独特的声音在他们的对话中说话？这将是第一件事情之一。读者是否感到同情或同情，或至少是某种强烈的反应，这些字符？
创意写作，你继续在外地工作，你看，它常常是主观的方法，使人们表达的东西。但是，某些东西是通用优秀的文学作品，其中之一是，优秀的文学作品，让读者思考了很多问题，让读者感受到了很多的问题，是中央在小说。如果该连接建立不马上，那么你的书已在一定程度上失败。
如果它是一个故事，是的，第一个段落。如果它是一种新型的，那么你有几页的工作，但在两三页，读者一定要继续读书。读者必须说，哇，这实在是令人兴奋和值得我的时间。 | 
发表于 2016-8-2 13:27:45