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2009年6月英语四级考试真题详解(写作)

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发表于 2016-7-28 21:44:45 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
 Part Ⅰ                 Writing                        (30 minutes)
  注意此部分试题在答题卡1上。
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Free admission to museums. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
  1、越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
  2、也会带来一些问题;
  3、你的看法?
   答案与精析
  Free Admission to Museums?
  1. Nowadays, a lot of museums open to the public for free, and a lot of people are attracted to go there. However, it also brought some unexpected problems.
  2. At present, people can get knowledge from many ways like libraries, internet, and other sources. However, there is also much information that people cannot get from the above ways. ①Free admission museums supply more chances for the public to get knowledge that cannot be easily accessed. People can learn more things about history, art, science and so on. ②Although this kind of policy brought much convenience to the public, it also caused some problems. For example, beggars and shabby-dressed people may enter the museums and cause bad reputation among the public; along with the increasing number of people getting into museums, there will be no enough service establishments to meet the requirements; ③besides, under the policy of free admission,④ the cultural relics displayed there may be inevitably broken or damaged by the crowds. Moreover, the crowds in the museums may also cause security problems.
  3. In my opinion, free admission is a good policy for the public, and it brings the public much convenience. But, we should also⑤ take possible measures to protect the cultural relics and maintain the order of spot. Besides, we can also take the policy of giving free admission first to children, then to the retired person, and last to the public. I think, this may help to solve the problems.
  1. 根据所列提纲,第一段开篇介绍,越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放及其原因。
  ① supply more chances for…表示“为……提供机会”;be easily accessed表示“容易得到/被利用”。用词恰当。
  2. 第二段介绍博物馆免费开放给人们带来便利的同时也会带来一些问题。
  ② 使用连词Although引导让步从句,使自己的观点表达更加流畅
  ③ 连接词用得好,使用副词besides进行进一步解释说明。
  ④ the cultural relics表示“文化遗产”的意思。
  3.最后一段使用In my opinion引出自己的看法,着重提出解决博物馆免费开放带来的问题。
  ⑤ take possible measures to do sth.表示“采取可能的措施做某事”,在提出问题解决方案时可采用此句式。
节选自   《大学英语四级考试真题与预测5+5》赠mp3

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