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2015.6四级作文必备练习:ATM使用利弊

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发表于 2016-7-28 13:16:28 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  作文在英语四六级考试中占据百分之十五的比重,这一部分要求考生写作条理清晰,语言表达连贯性好才能得到高分,因此看起来虽然只是一篇短短的文章,高分数却是不那么容易拿到的。下面来一起练习一下这篇英语四级作文吧,希望考生能够更好地为2015年的四六级考试提前做好准备。

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  On the Use of the ATM
  1. 现在人们使用自动取款机存取钱比较普遍
  2. 使用自动取款机给人们带来很多方便,但也其弊端
  3. 我的建议

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  On the Use of the ATM
  ATM is not fresh to city residents. You can find at least one such machine in banks. And now, it is spreading in most rural areas of China. It is a common phenomenon for people to withdraw or deposit money through the ATM.
  ATM has helped both bank clerks and their customers greatly. For one thing, it partly frees the clerks from heavy work. For another thing, it provides customers with more speedy and around-the-clock service. But, ATM can be imperfect. First of all, you can’t withdraw as much money as you want. Five thousand Yuan is the maximum sum you can get daily. Secondly, there are risks for customers who withdraw money from ATM. They may suffer losses from theft, robbery or their own carelessness.
  I think the following tips can avoid most troubles. First, withdraw a large sum of money through bank clerk service. Secondly, make sure the place where ATM was installed is safe enough. Thirdly, keep secret of password and remember to get your card back. Finally, get a companion when you use ATM at night.
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