2013年大学英语六级改错20篇（二）
第三篇： Error Correction (15 minutes)The key to being a winner is to have desire
and a goal from which you refuse to be deterred (被吓住).
That desire fuels your dreams and the
special goal keeps you focusing. --71.
Deeply down we all have a hope that our --72.
destiny is not to be average and prosaic. Everyone
talks about a good game, but the winner goes out
and do something. To win, there has to be movement --73.
and physical action. Attitudes and persistence can
help us become who we want to be. --74.
Competition is the best motivator. Because --75.
many people use competition as an excuse for not
doing something, those who really want to success --76.
see competition as an opportunity, and they're
willing to do the tough work necessarily to win. --77.
Learn to deal with fear. Fear is the greatest
deterrent to taking risk. People worry so much --78.
about failing that their fear paralyzes them,
drained the energy they might otherwise be using to --79.
grow.
You can cultivate self-respect by developing a
commitment to your own talents. It may be
necessary to do the thing you fear the most in
order to put that fear in rest, so that it can no --80.
longer control you.
答案：
71. focused
72. Deep
73. does
74. what
75. While/Although
76. succeed
77. necessary
78. risks
79. draining
80. to
第四篇： Error Correction (15 minutes)
Changes in the way people live bring about changes in the
jobs that they do. More and more people live in towns and cities
instead on farms and in villages. Cities and states have to provide --71.
services city people want, such like more police protection, more --72.
hospitals, and more schools. This means that more policemen,
more nurses and technicians, and more teachers must be hired.
Advances in technology has also changed people's lives. --73.
Dishwashers and washing machines do jobs that were once done
by the hand. The widespread use of such electrical appliances --74.
means that there is a need for servicemen to keep it running --75.
properly.
People are earning higher wages and salaries. This leads --76.
changes in the way of life. As income goes down, people may not --77.
want more food to eat or more clothes to wear. But they may
want more and better care from doctors, dentists and hospitals.
They are likely to travel more and to want more education
Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. --78.
The government also affects the kind of works people do. --79.
The governments of most countries spend huge sums of money
for international defense. They hire thousands of engineers, --80.
scientists, clerks, typists and secretaries to work on the many
different aspects of defense.
答案：
71. (instead) on --- of
72. like --- as
73. has --- have
74. the --- /
75. it --- them
76. leads --- causes
77. down --- up
78. Nevertheless --- Therefore
79. works --- work/job/jobs
80. international --- national
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