2014年6月英语四级作文点评:豫园
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【参考范文】
Yu Garden
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I
would like to take her to Yu Garden.
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God
Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and
exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and
take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines
like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of
mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious
food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different
craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the
process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is
a place where the features of this city are combined.
【点评】
本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式,改为情境式话题作文,可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活,要求介绍自己家乡的某景点,写起来相对简单。此类文章在结构上的要求不像议论文那样严格,所以可以在语言文字上博出彩,增加词汇的丰富性、句子的流畅性都是不错的加分点。
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