2011年大学英语四级写作提高笔记 (12)
151. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。
152. It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
153. Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规则的人应该受到处罚。
154. There is no one but longs to go to college.
人们都希望上大学。
155. Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃作运动。
156. It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色
157. Summer is sultry. That’s the reason why I don’t like it.
夏天很闷热,这就是我不喜欢它的原因。
158. The progress of the society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
159. We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们知道努力的价值。
160. Taking exercise is closely related to health.
作运动与健康息息相关。
161. We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
162. The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
163. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
164. Reading does good to our mind.
读书对心灵有益。
165. Overwork does harm to health.
工作过度对健康有害。
166. Pollution poses a great threat o our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。
167. We should do our best to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
168. Weather a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic, which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well.
家庭人口多好还是家庭人口少好是一个非常通俗的主题,不仅是城里人,而且农民都经常讨论这个问题
169. As is known to all, fake and inferior commodities harm the interests of consumers.
众所周知,假冒伪劣商品损害了消费者的利益。
170. Today an increasing number of people
二.基本写作范例:
第一段:
1.What we today call (think/believe) 中心事物A was, indeed,中心事物 A of, by, and for ordinary, everyday “中心事物A” who with increasing prosperity and leisure,(这里可换词)created a market for of all kinds, and especially for中心事物A 引转。
2. Some believe that 抄题,but others believe that抄题。
3.I am of the opinion that 观点①is not only the imperative need of mankind but also one of the noblest aspirations we have in the present-day world, because原因简述。
第二段
The reason is not far to seek.
Firstly,
Secondly,
Thirdly,
第三段
In short, it follows from the foregoing discussion that this issue is to be settled by weighing the pros and cons and not by any arbitrary decision, therefore, we may con conclude that the argument (照抄自己的主题)is a viable one, inasmuch as it rests upon a fundamental principle of science and logic, namely, that of cause and effect.
三、写作技巧汇总、
1、开首段
(1)谚语法
谚语一般已为大家所接受,由它开头引出下文或提出作者本人的观点,也易为读者所接受,如:
a. As the saying goes “Money makes the mare go”, but there are something that can’t be bought with money such as time and true love.
b. As the saying goes “Time flies”, “Time is money”, how to spend your time properly is becoming increasingly important to everyone. 其中“Time is money”皆是谚语,说明文章内容的范围,从而引出主题,提出自己的观点。
若无谚语,则可用My grandmother told me that……
(2)定义法
有时对题目中关键词作一些简单或正面解释,限定其范围,也有利于引出主题。如:
a. What is decisiveness? It doesn’t mean act rashly.(反面定义)
b. What is advertisement? It is the words or pictures used on media. TV for example, to propagandize a certain product or give a warning to people(正式定义)。
本方法主要对写作中心事物进行定义或解释。
(3)提问法
提出一个或一连串问题,以激起读者兴趣,从而引出主题。如:Do you have many friends? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer?
本方法较难掌握,一般可以从对举、区别、喜爱、环境上去写。
(4)概括法
先概括总结文章内容涉及的现状,然后引出主题。如:
In recent years, while our industries and businesses have developed quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced. Efforts are being made to prevent from cutting more trees, but to realize the significance of making cities greener is of importance.
本写法还可以从过去/历史上写,然后引伸到现在。
(5)间接开头法
以叙述别人的观点开始,引出自己的真实看法。如:
a. People often say that money can buy all things, but I think it is not…
b. Some persons say that love makes the world go round. Others of a less romantic and more practical turn of mind say that it isn’t love, it is money. But the truth is that it is the energy that makes the world go round…
本方法主要为****别人,坚立自己。
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