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2018年12月英语六级作文预测及满分作文:谈谈你对父母溺爱孩子这种现象的看法

  "Nowadays parents are too permissive with their children." Do you agree or
disagreewith this statement?
          Today, few people would defend the traditional attitude to children. If you
recall whathappened in old days, you would be astonished at the severe and
strict education forchildren, for instance, old-fashioned spanking was common
punishment for children. As a result, while the parents thus established their
own authority, the poor children would never recoverfrom the dreadful traumatic
experience when they grew up.
          However, as you know, things often go to extremes. Nowadays, parents'
confidence in theirown authority has been greatly undermined. Countless articles
in magazines and newspapersand tv programmes publicize childcare. When so much
over-enthusiastic advice flying about, mum and dad just don't know what to do
any more. In the end, they do nothing.
          So from early childhood, the kids are in charge and parents' lives are
regulated according tothe needs of their off spring. When the little dears
develop into teenagers, they take completecontrol. If the young people are going
to have a party, for example, parents are asked to leavethe house. Their
presence merely spoils the fun. What else can the poor parents do but obey?
          In my mind, a child certainly needs love, and a lot of it. But the
excessive pe rmissiveness ofmodern parents is surely doing more harm than good.
The spread of juvenile delinquency islargely due to parental laxity. Mother,
believing that her little baobao can look after himself, isnot at home when he
returns f rom school, so little baobao roams the street. The
dividing-linebetween permissiveness and sheer negligence is very fine
indeed.
          cet6六级作文结构分析:
          ·severe and strict education for children
          * spanking
          * children's dreadful experience
          ·things often go to extremes
          * parents' authority unde rmined
          * over-enthusiastic child care
          * parents'life regulated according to children's needs
          ·comments
          * excessive permissiveness and sheer negligence — a fine dividing line
          cet6六级作文内容分析:
          本文是一篇议论文。显然作者的观点是认同这一命题中的说法的。文章以对比的手法将早先对待小孩的传统教育方式作为铺衬,然后以一句“however,
things often go to extremes.”为转折,将话题导入主题“nowadays parents are too permissive
with their children.”例证真实而生动,有较强的说服力。最后一段是作者的观点和评论。本文逻辑性强,层次分明,读来统一而连贯。
          cet6六级作文万能句型:
          permissive (ness) a.(n.) 随意(的) ,放纵(的)
          be astonished at 对……感到吃惊
          spank (ing) v.(n.) 打屁股
          traumatic a. 受到创伤的
          things often go to extremes. 事情往往会走向极端
          undermine v. 瓦解
          regulate v. 调节
          offspring n. 儿女
          dear n. 亲爱的人
          obey v. 服从
          juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪
          parental laxity 父母的疏忽
          roam v. 游荡
          dividing-line 分界线
          sheer negligence 完全忽视
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