雅思写作高分范文：有关国际援助的两种观点
Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help eachother, while other argue that the aid money is misspent by the governments that
receive it, so the international aid should not be given to the poor countries
in the world. Discuss the two views of international aid, and give your
opinion.
With the process of economic globalization, many countries and regions have
strengthened cooperation and liaison in the fields of industry, agriculture,
trade and finance. In order to dedicate to the mutual development, many
developed countries spare no effort to help the poor countries by means of
technological, medical and financial aid, which, to my mind, is quite essential
to the development of the world. (64 words)
Firstly, aids from developed countries optimize people's living standard
and eradicate poverty in the poor countries. Due to the backwardness of science
and technology, people in some undeveloped countries and regions such as Africa,
Latin America and Asia suffer a great deal from poverty, hunger and the scarce
of water. International aids from developed countries have improved their living
environment and helped them with the development of agriculture, industry and
economy. (70 words)
Secondly, international aids give good medical care and help promote
hygienic condition in the poor countries. Malaria(虐疾), cholera(霍乱) and
smallpox(天花)were once severe threats to people's health. With the help of the
World Health Organization and some developed countries, these diseases have been
eliminated soon and the residents in the infected areas survived these deadly
diseases, which would have devoured millions of lives without international
aid.(78 words)
Finally, aids to the undeveloped countries in turn benefit the donators.
Due to the limitation of natural and human resources, the production cost rises
sharply in the developed countries. With a view to reducing cost, many countries
transferred their assembly lines and production bases to the developing
countries, which not only solves the problem of low rate of employment in the
developing countries but also make full use of the local resources. (72
words)
Nevertheless, some countries are showing great concern about the
mal-expense of their aid aroused by bureaucracy and corruption of some
governments. Therefore, the governments should take effective measures to
utilize international aids reasonably and prevent abuse. Only with the help of
international aids, can our world develop more quickly and prosperously. (323
words totally)
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