托福写作高分范文：你想建一个什么节日
Topic176：假如你能创建一个节日，你喜欢为什么人或者什么事情建一个节日?Topic176 Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new
holiday， what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to
celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
[参考提纲]
176建立一个移民日
(1)移民为经济做出了很大贡献
(2)移民为文化作出了很大贡献
(3)移民为科学做出了很大贡献
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Topic： 176
Most countries already have many holidays. In my country， China， we have
nineteen official holidays. However， I believe that my new holiday， "Walking
Day" would be very beneficial and should be added to the nineteen holidays China
already has. In this essay， I will outline the three main reasons why "Walking
Day" would be a very good holiday.
First， walking is good exercise. As we all know， people all over the world
are becoming busier and busier. They are studying more and more so that they can
have better jobs. When they work， they are working more and more. As a result，
people have less time for other important things in their lives， including
exercise. We can read reports in the newspapers everyday about people who have
worse health and complain about poor health condition. Many of these problems
could be reduced by exercising more and walking is one of the best and simplest
exercises for people.
Second， by walking， we can reduce pollution and thereby protect the
environment. As technology improves all over the world and people have more and
more money， they are starting to use this money to buy automobiles. As a result，
people are using public transportation less and less. Driving one's own car
every day has had a very large impact on the environment as a result of the
pollution created by gas burning automobiles. Walking is the perfect way to
reduce pollution since there are so many other benefits as well.
Finally， by walking， people can slow down the pace of their lives. Perhaps
this is one of the greatest benefits of walking more. Life at the beginning of
the new millennium is stressful——people are competing with each other for better
jobs， countries and companies are competing with each other for business. Many
people start to forget about the importance of slowing down in their lives， of
simply enjoying the moment. People need to contemplate life more. Walking is a
perfect opportunity to slow down， think about life， and simply enjoy the big，
beautiful world that we live in.
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