托福写作高分范文：是否同意社区建大学
Topic30：你是否同意在你的社区建大学?Topic30 It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built
in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons
and details in your answer.
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Topic: 30
I oppose having a new high school built in my neighborhood. Although I know
there's a real need for a new facility, I have to say that I don't want one
built so close to me. I think it would cause a lot of problems.
First of all, there are very few teenagers in this neighborhood, or in our
suburban subdivision, for that matter. Most of the residents here are either
retired or are just starting out with young children. This means that the kids
coming to the new high school wouldn't be walking. They would come on buses or
would be driving to the school. Either way, this would mean a lot more traffic
on our streets.
In addition to the traffic on school days, there also would be traffic
whenever there was a sporting event, such as a basketball or football game, or
activities at the school. Would there be enough parking in the school lot for
everyone attending those events? Probably not. Consequently, those extra cars
would end up in our neighborhood.
My neighbors and I would also be upset about the loss of the park, which is
the site that's been selected for the high school. Mothers with young children
gather there every morning for their kids to play together. People my age like
to take a walk after dinner. On weekends, that park is a place for picnics and
relaxation. We'd be sorry to lose our neighborhood park.
I also have some concerns about all those young people being in our
neighborhood. Would there be problems with drugs or fights? Could the school
district guarantee us that security would be apriority? These are concerns that
I don't think can be addressed sufficiently for me to support a new high school
in my neighborhood.
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