雅思写作指导：范文汇总-电脑VS老师
Teachers no longer play an important role in the classroom due to the wideuse of computers in education. What is your opinion?
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Introduction ( 42words)
It is witnessed that computer technology has brought human beings
uncountable benefits and an educational revolution seemingly can be expected
hence a substitution of teachers in the classroom. As to discuss this
controversial issue, opinions vary from person to person.
BODY1(118 words)
On the one hand, the teacher plays an important role as a supervisor as
well as a conductor in the classroom (topic sentence).It is commonly believed
that adolescents are too young to distinguish the good from the bad and they
need correct guidance from decent adults; otherwise, they might stray from the
right way. Children are always easy to become addicted to computer games, which
have too much violent and pornographic propaganda. Without teachers' guidance,
most children would spend hours playing fascinating games on computers instead
of studying useful knowledge during school times. Moreover, a teacher in the
classroom may organize a discussion on a complicated or logical question and
finally conclude with a sensible answer, but computers can never do so.
BODY 2
On the other hand, in some way, computers can replace teachers in language
learning (topic sentence). In many countries, particularly in China, most
English teachers have incorrect pronunciation in English. It is not unusual that
Chinese students have a hard time to communicate with English native speakers
due to an inaccurate sound producing method which they have imitated from their
Chinese teachers. However, if you go online to learn spoken English with
foreigners, you will be astonished to find that thousands of native English
speakers are available on Internet every day and they are willing to help you
improve your English speaking skills. Through net-voice-chat, you are bound to
speak good English with an assistance that you can never expect to be attached
by Chinese teachers.
Conclusion: (46words)
From above discussion, we can see that computers and teachers play
different roles in education. We cannot just arbitrarily assert that teachers
are not needed; on the contrary, we ought to take advantage of this teaching
resource despite the application of computers in education.
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