雅思写作指导：范文汇总-烟草是毒品吗?
Some people claim that it is their freedom to use tobacco while othersthink tobacco should be classified into illegal drugs. To what extent do you
agree with using tobacco?
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Introduction (56 words)
Since the discovery of tobacco related to a number of health problems, an
increasing number of people have called for prohibiting smoking. It is
undeniable that still a considerable amount of smokers exist in this world. I
would like to examine the advantages and disadvantages of smoking cigarettes as
following and then offer my own opinion.
Body1(95words)
There are some advantages to taking tobacco.(topic sentence) First, tobacco
industry contributes a great proportion of revenue to the nation. Extremely high
taxation imposed on tobacco yielding and cigarette manufacturing has released
the financial burden for both the government and the individual taxpayer
generation by generation. Second, the soothing effects of smoking has been
confirmed by ordinary smokers; particularly those who have hard-brain-working
jobs are in favor of it; they claim that smoking cigarettes can make them calm
and stimulate brain cells to work more efficiently. Finally, cigarettes play an
important role in social activities.
Body2 (106words)
On the other hand, smoking demonstrates numerous negative effects.(topic
sentence) Initially, nicotine may bring takers a number of diseases. Second-hand
smoking also does harm to your health. Moreover, hatred from non-smokers always
grow against smokers hence some conflicts arise frequently. We then look at the
statistics showing that thousands of fire accidents worldwide occur each year
due to the litter of non-extinguished cigarette ends, not to mention the related
deaths and losses. Last but not least, expenses have to be taken into
consideration. Fine cigarettes are not cheap. If you get addicted to them, your
daily amount of cigarette consumption will increase inevitably, emptying your
pocket money.
Conclusion ( 62words)
After all, the above demerits and merits of using tobacco cannot possibly
justify tobacco being listed as illegal drugs such as cocaine and heroin, which
can extremely affect the nervous system hence to ruin a person's health very
soon as well as to rise crime rates dramatically; I suggest more restricted
smoking areas be planned so as not to violate non-smokers' rights.
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