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雅思写作指导:范文汇总-吃动物残忍吗?

  Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary
while others argue that animal meat is essential for people's daily lives.
Discuss this topic in both sides and give your opinion.
          -----------(Argumentation)-------------- 289 words in total -----------
          Introduction:
          When you visit a Macdonald fast-food restaurant, enjoying a Big Mac
sandwiched with a piece of beef should be an inviting meal. However, many people
may feel disgusted and cruel if a dog is killed for preparing hamburgers. (38
words)
          Body1 (99 words)
          On the one hand, some animals can bring help and joy to humans .(topic
sentence) It is very common to see some people play games with a dog or other
kind of cute pets in a park. The laughter tells us how enjoyable and harmonious
it is to raise a pet in the family. It is well known that a fierce cat can keep
mice away from the family and a well-trained dog can lead blind people to walk
in the street without causing traffic accidents. For these reasons, these
animals are our companions and killing them, say, pets, is quit
unacceptable.
          Body 2 ( 87 words)
          On the other hand, many kinds of animals such as cattle and fowl are the
source of food ( topic sentence).It is reported that without eating meat for a
couple of months, one may suffer from deficiency diseases. Eating an appropriate
amount of meat every day is essential for keeping us healthily alive. Moreover,
meat-processed industry has enjoyed a boom for hundreds of years, and millions
of people are engaged in the relevant occupations. Hence any acts against this
industry may result in a considerable amount of lay-offs, destabilizing society.
Conclusion ( 65 words) Finally, I will conclude this debatable topic with my own
opinion . Man is the supreme living thing in the world. Humans have rights to
take advantage of any kind of animals. Pets should not be killed because raising
pets can offer a more enjoyable and helpful family life, and people should stick
at eating traditional food like beef, poultry and pork owing to an essential
need .
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