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雅思写作指导:范文汇总-国际旅游带来文化冲突?

  International tourism now is the biggest industry in the world.
Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between the peoples
from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above
opinion?
          ----------argumentation-----totally 353 words-------------------
          Tourism can create jobs and other opportunities for almost all communities.
Therefore, Governments worldwide have worked out many incentives aimed at
developing overseas market. Personally I believe, tension is always accompanied
with influxes of foreign visitors, which has already overshadowed understanding
achieved via travel. (44words)
          Let me start by talking about the tension brought by international tourism.
Last Independence Day Festival , I , followed by a couple of friends, traveled
to a small county located in Bolivia. Surprisingly we happened to see thousands
of people singing and dancing on the street. Three guys dressing in local
costume swayed badly towards us, bringing drinking beer for us. Owing to our
arrival in a totally new place, we declined to take any alcohol in case of being
entrapped. Unexpectedly quarrels occurred as a consequence of language barrier.
What’s worse, one of them spitted on us, whose behavior turned our journey to be
a trip of humiliation and resentment. As a matter of fact, the local residents
were celebrating yearly Beer Festival. Our refusal was regarded as a bad manner
to look down upon them. For this reason, I would infer that international
tourists usually spend only one or two days staying in the same place. It is
impossible for them to thoroughly have a good knowledge of the local culture.
Consequently misconception and disputes happen frequently between peoples
embodied with varied culture backgrounds. (185 words)
          Now let me turn to the discussion of understanding gained on the tour.
Generally a western tourist is fond of visiting different places with exploring
different customs, particularly those primitive cultures in remote mountainous
areas. Such an exploration can expose himself with more opportunities of
communicating with local people, which might be considered as a good way to
better understand the local culture. However, different interpretation and
religion eventually would probably lead him to conclude that those odd
traditions handed down generation by generation in the destined region are no
more than a superstitious belief. Such understanding does little good to
maintain sound relationship between nations. (106 words)
          All in all, global travel should be discouraged until understanding amid
peoples overwhelmingly outweighs negative effects like tension. (18 words)
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