雅思写作指导：范文汇总-语言灭绝
Why are a variety of languages and cultures disappearing nowadays?-----------discussion-----42+112+121+34=309 words in total------------
Introduction: (42 words)
Now the chance of experiencing different lifestyles or imitating to speak a
few words of other languages for fun is slim due to the disappearance of some
cultures and languages. I think that superstitious cultures and languages behind
modern times cannot survive(thesis statement).
Body1 (112words)
Once I visited Se ethnic minorities village, located on a hillside in south
of China. To my disappointment, I did not feel a different thing about ethnic
clothes, food or music. Ridiculously, an old villager said that the forefather
of his race had been an embodiment of a fairy with a dog head and a human body!
The old generations have been proud of being the descendants of the fairy;
however, Generation Y may feel ashamed of that because they know exactly this is
a superstitious myth and to be a dog's descendants is not a glorious
thing.Apparently,the cultures basing on superstitious belief would be torn down
by social progress(topic sentence).
Body2(121words)
Further more, a language without written methods may be replaced by
advanced one(topic sentence). There are many parts of the world where people
cannot write because they do not have their own written language. The only way
they can preserve their history is to recount it as sagas handed down from one
generation of storytellers to another. With the fast pace of globalization,
international aid can be put forward to reach every corner of the world. Those
underdeveloped or isolated areas could receive food, medicine and education. The
advanced civilization has pervaded into those primitive cultures hence they have
started to learn writing something by the means of the available language
accompanied with aid. Therefore their original one would have disappeared.
Conclusion (34words)
In conclusion, the disappearance of some cultures or languages is not worth
preventing. This is an unavoidable outcome of the global economic growth. Most
importantly, people can enjoy more prosperity and social progress.
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