雅思写作指导：范文汇总-小孩犯罪家长应受惩罚吗?
When a five-year-old child commits a crime, should the parents be punishedfor that? In your opinion, at what age should a child start to be responsible
for what he/she did?
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There seem to be more senseless/unconscious crimes done by young children
that appear to lack a motive or even indulge a whim. What a thorny issue to
handle for both the parents and the victim involved! Some people may argue that
children are products of environment, so the family should be responsible for
all delinquency of them. This is absolutely wrong. ( 61 words)
In modern society, parents are not the only influence on children.
Generally a five-year-old child is sent to attend kindergarten. Obviously the
young child spends a great deal of time exposed to other influences such as the
teachers, other children, other parents and television. Particularly in many
contemporary families, both the parents are required to work, sometimes over
time. This situation could possibly result in the little kids falling under more
influence of others or media. If this is the case then too many people should be
punished whenever young children commit crimes. Undoubtedly this would be too
impractical to implement. ( 101 words)
What is the right age to justify a child starting to take charge of his or
her actions? I think 15 would be rational/justified. In China, nine-year
compulsory education system can mould a child into a comparatively sensible and
responsible person, because basic knowledge of law has been conducted and,
consequently a 15-year-old teenager basically knows what qualities make
law-abiding citizens. Therefore, 15 or over, when committing a crime, he or she
deserves a prize behind the bar. ( 76 words)
Let there be no doubt, young children will grow older and eventually become
the needs of tomorrow's labor force. Sufficient education and decent guidance
from the parents, the school,Governments and society can shape them into a no
nonsense, responsible and respectable citizen in future, and this is their
blessed destiny. ( 51 words)
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