2012年5月20日托福议论文两篇写作指导
2012年5月20日托福议论文两篇：OWL 1)工作为利 2)工作为名
新托福真题还原：“工作是为了金钱报酬还是为了社会地位?”
作者答题的立场1)为利，2)为名。两边都不好说。尝试各写一篇相反立场的范文给网友做参考比较。答题的立场既然不同，两篇的主题也不一样。支持主题的论证--理由，例子，细节--也随着见风转舵。尚请读者评审哪一篇比较具有逻辑说服力?
TWE真题：1. 工作为利
>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "The main
purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status." Use
specific reasons and any relevant examples and details from your knowledge or
experience to support your answer.
OWL Example Writing
By Jeenn Lee Hsieh
谢振礼原创猫头鹰议论文
Social status is not one of those few things which money cannot buy. More
than fame or praise, income is the most motivational factor that people work,
live and die. It is possible that successfully earning a lot of cash is a ladder
to high social status; fame alone, although being success just the same, does
not necessarily generate huge wealth.
In a world of mixed economies, nearly everything carries a price tag, and
social standing is no exception. As people place an importance on social
standing, inevitably they are thinking about money in the first place. The
ultimate incentive for people who have jobs is understandably money rather than
any other thing. In other words, holding powerful and influential position is
the means to the end--getting richer. So, if one has to work to make ends meet,
it is more about real money than vain respect. In fact, rarely does anyone seek
merely social status without previously calculating in brain the size of
monetary gain.
There is a common perception that financial standing and social status are
one and the same. And this explains in part why the two are often evaluated
similarly and can sometimes substitute for each other to some extent. The
difference lies perhaps only in the order of priority: first money, then all the
rest. Money being the main purpose, literally not a few people prefer to be
working to death so that they are able to live well in life. An analogy may be
found in an old Chinese saying: "Just as birds would die when hungry for food,
people would die when hungry for money." The same is seldom true of social
status in a capitalist society, though.
Speaking of people who need to work anyway, money is everybody's universal
"mother tongue," social status being invariably a "second language." Money talks
and can buy plenty of important things, including food and fame. Logically, it
is better to believe that people could live happily without high social standing
but would live miserably without sufficient money. (Essay created by Jeenn Lee
Hsieh)
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